OTHER: Questions 3 and 4 need it to be fixed the quotations and paraphrasing was not right
Note: all the answers need it to be inserted in the same document and with out deleting any information from that original document.

this is what i got from my professor :

I just read your paper, and it has serious weaknesses. You are not paraphrasing, as explained in the document I posted in the Files component of Canvas, or as explained in the Keys for Writers text. You need to understand that particular writing task. In addition, you are not following the instructions regarding the format. You need to make an appointment with me as soon as possible so you can better understand what I want you to do.