Presentation Analysis

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have already typed the paper and submitted and got the revisions back from my teacher. I will be attaching 3 documents, the first is the assignment I used with a length to the video I analyzed as well as a written copy of the lecture.
The second document is my first submission with comments made from my teacher. This document is england_unit1_1
The third document is my second submission of the document with revision made to the first two paragraphs.This document is england_unit1_2
Please use the comments from the professor of both documents but the second document to actually edit since it is my most recent update.
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