Implementing the use of electronic medical records in data entry to increase efficiency in a primary health care centre in United Arab Emirates
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Need to reviserewrite this essay according to the following Feedback::
Overall Comment
This just about does the job, Alya. It is adequate without setting the world alight. But it is certainly good enough to provide an passable introduction to your project report once you have
considered the points that I suggest below.
Although your Table of contents shows page numbers, your actual script does not have them. Please ensure that everything you submit has page numbers.
Specific Feedback. Title
Good enough title
Introduction
While the Introduction is relatively good and to the point, I cannot believe that you are still saying after 18 months on the programme that this is a research project! It is not, it is a change
management project and the subject matter of chapter 3 must reflect this fact. It is not a chapter about research methodology. Please consult your guidelines as I say every seminar.
Organisational context
Ok section
Rationale
Reasonable section. You mention a SWOT analysis that you conducted but provide no analysis for the reader to assess the need for the project. Remember that the content of the analysis should be
discussed in your narrative even if you display the analysis graphically.
Description of the project
Reasonable enough section
Role of Student
Short section but just about adequate.
Summary & Conclusion
This OK until I read what the content of your Literature Review was going to be. I hope that you didn’t complete it as you have suggested but that it is subject based as we have mentioned many
times in seminars.
Referencing
This is OK, but please remember that in your final References listing the full name of each publication needs to be displayed and not an abbreviated version.