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Order Description

As discussed on the phone, I would like to have 4500 words summary of my dissertation (attachment #1). This summary should be similar to the attached example (attachment #2) in perspective of subtitles and content (especially for the methodology part).

Please be ATTENTION to the following comments from my supervisor regarding the dissertation that shall be taken under consideration during preparation of the paper:
? There is insufficient literature incorporated into the introduction to help rationalise the work.
? The objectives are poorly constructed and need to be reviewed and improved upon – it needs to be much more explicit exactly what is to be done to achieve this research.
? some of the objectives are statements rather than objectives
? There is very little peer reviewed literature in the literature review – and what is discussed is not discussed in a particularly critical manner
? The scope is rather wide; I need to narrow this down by further reading of the peer reviewed literature.
? No clear research question despite having the title of Research Question.
? Methodology is missed from the report.
? Need to be much more use of peer reviewed literature in the literature review.