To your dissertaion about Sarah Lucas please add some information: page 16 – write about Andy Warhol short film about Eating, about his Factory and leather jacket of Sarah Lucas. Page 19 please write about Georgia O’Keeffe in relation to her paintings with skulls. Page 19 & 20 are very weak – all are based on assumptions rather than academic research – please re-write. The information about skull – masculine needs to be rewritten. It’s easy to question. Please mention Faucalt and S. Freud. About Freud useful books: Lorraine Gamman “Women, Writing and Fetishism”. “Jokes and Their Relation to the Unconscious” by Freud about double meaning. Please reread the whole paper and rewrite the weak pages. Could you please write additions to the paper in red colour. List of Illustrations needs to be on the begining of the work; content list after the illustration list.