INSTRUCTIONS NOT FOLLOWED: assignment – 4 ………

need to modify work…got grade only 20. feedback from from professor -.

feedback from from professor –
assignment – 4

I initially marked this assignment with a 20 . you would have the opportunity to correct the work. I think you have a misconception of the work.

In your assignment 4 paper and prior, I suggested that you contact me because the work is not presented according to the manner in which a business plan is to be presented. The work resembles that of a researched essay, and as my examples illustrate, students are to present information where the reader is not being taught a concept. Students should take a stand as a stakeholder in the company and prepare the document as if you were standing up and presenting the information to yield some result. For instance, are you a project manager trying to get a new client to accept your proposal?

As we discussed, respective to the plan to continue on with the BA647 class where students are to present a business plan based as an extension of the LMS project is sometimes problematic because students are not presenting enough original work in this course or because much of the information has been shared on the internet where the work is ultimately plagiarized. I have not seen a direct match for the information that you have submitted thus far, which is good, I am just concerned the potential exists.

more feedback on assignment 4- ou wrote as part of an Introduction. The sole purpose o …
more feedback on assignment 4-
ou wrote as part of an Introduction.

The sole purpose of the capstone projects is to provide the student with an opportunity to apply the knowledge and skills obtained through all the courses taken. All along, the capstone projects are made for the decision of knowledge application and the use of high fidelity
simulation into the real life situation. As opposed to my peer I will be able to apply the knowledge and skills gained, have an ability to solve problems and after all make critical decisions regarding the issues on subject on study by using fidelity simulation.( Synthesis and
Application of Knowledge).

assignment 5———

Feedback from professorfor assignment 5 It seems your headings do not match the information …
feedback from professor .

It seems your headings do not match the information as the Capstone project is your proposal. What works best is if you submit your entire proposal each weeks so I have a better understanding of where you stand with your project. I am hoping the documents below will help you complete sections in your work. I am hopeful you will be able to make the necessary corrections going forward to successfully complete the course.
CUSTOMIZE CONTENT: assignment – 4 ………

need to modify work…got grade only 20. feedback from from professor -.

feedback from from professor –
assignment – 4

I initially marked this assignment with a 20 . you would have the opportunity to correct the work. I think you have a misconception of the work.

In your assignment 4 paper and prior, I suggested that you contact me because the work is not presented according to the manner in which a business plan is to be presented. The work resembles that of a researched essay, and as my examples illustrate, students are to present information where the reader is not being taught a concept. Students should take a stand as a stakeholder in the company and prepare the document as if you were standing up and presenting the information to yield some result. For instance, are you a project manager trying to get a new client to accept your proposal?

As we discussed, respective to the plan to continue on with the BA647 class where students are to present a business plan based as an extension of the LMS project is sometimes problematic because students are not presenting enough original work in this course or because much of the information has been shared on the internet where the work is ultimately plagiarized. I have not seen a direct match for the information that you have submitted thus far, which is good, I am just concerned the potential exists.

more feedback on assignment 4- ou wrote as part of an Introduction. The sole purpose o …
more feedback on assignment 4-
ou wrote as part of an Introduction.

The sole purpose of the capstone projects is to provide the student with an opportunity to apply the knowledge and skills obtained through all the courses taken. All along, the capstone projects are made for the decision of knowledge application and the use of high fidelity
simulation into the real life situation. As opposed to my peer I will be able to apply the knowledge and skills gained, have an ability to solve problems and after all make critical decisions regarding the issues on subject on study by using fidelity simulation.( Synthesis and
Application of Knowledge).

assignment 5———

Feedback from professorfor assignment 5 It seems your headings do not match the information …
feedback from professor .

It seems your headings do not match the information as the Capstone project is your proposal. What works best is if you submit your entire proposal each weeks so I have a better understanding of where you stand with your project. I am hoping the documents below will help you complete sections in your work. I am hopeful you will be able to make the necessary corrections going forward to successfully complete the course.