I want to add four more pages adding the teachers notes. This is the important part I need added:
“Please go back and provided the required introduction, the section on your theory, the section on methodology and the conclusion.” “Tell me why you chose the references that you have. How do they support your research?”

Here are teachers notes:

Unfortunately, you not follow my directions for the literature review. I described to you the five sections that were required in the feedback for the week 4 assignment. You seem to be writing one paper. Your thesis is five chapters and the literature review is only one of those chapters. Your literature review chapter has five sections as I already mentioned. Please go back and provided the required introduction, the section on your theory, the section on methodology and the conclusion. In the middle of that in the third section you add what you already have for your literature review on the topical material. Use section titles both for the main sections and for the sub sections within your topical material. You are writing a chapter to a thesis not a lit review for a class. There are huge differences. So this means you can not just have the title of the article and provide a review. You need to make it flow as in a chapter in a book. All references need to go at the end. Tie everything together. Tell me why you chose the references that you have. How do they support your research? Please let me know if you have questions.