Paper, Order, or Assignment Requirements

Basically, for this paper you have the base and can use most of my old paper. Some parts have to be modified, some need to be removed and other parts need to be created.

Hereby are the comments that the teacher gave me to improve my paper and make it better. Please do as he asked:

– All the paper is written in the wrong tense. This is just about the research as the full business proposal will be done in a few months
– The point is to plan the research according to Research Method theory
– This paper right now does not meet the majority of the theoretical elements of research method as it is required.
– Most of the outline used for the paper is wrong, and some parts of the paper are not to be done in this paper. For this please look at my friends paper (example paper) to see how she did it and follow her outline and way to do it.

– There are no research method references and this is a huge issue. You need to add some. The referencing of data in text is good and can be kept.

YOU APPEAR TO HAVE ALMOST TOTALLY MISSED THE POINT OF THIS SECTION AND IN NOT GIVING ME ANY THEORY OF RM, THIS PAPER CANNOT BE PASSED. THE GOOD NEWS IS THAT YOU HAVE A VERY SOLID HANDLE ON WHAT YOU ARE GOING TO COLLECT IN NEXT SEMESTER AND THAT SHOULD LEAD TO A GOOD IRS.
EXPLAIN YOUR PLAN IN RELATION TO THE THEORY OF WHAT IT SAYS IN THE BRIEF AND THIS WILL SOON BE A PASS.