Basically i have already started with my dissertation topic its on folk toys of karachisindh. Ad you know folk toys exists in a very small scale now a days i would like to focus on my dissertation on what role folk toys are playing in sustaining our local cultures and traditions. I have written my introduction and literature review but i want you to edit it with whatever remarks i got. edit them and create a solid argument between the technological advancement, computerized toys how they have taken over our cultural folk toys. my dissertation question is Can folk toys serve as a vehicle for sustaining our local cultures and traditions? i have identified few clusters in the city of karachi where i live and few agencies are also working in the making and contributions have been done which i will provide to you but apart from that you need to build arguments or show some similarities with some references in regard to existence of folk toys and counter arguments with globalization. Below i am sharing my introduction and literature review. please edit it and then we will work over